From c14a3aecd65a52c27fc3fa3dd6cd1f5e99b706ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Merka <405417@muni.cz>
Date: Tue, 15 Jan 2019 14:47:32 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Resolved MR comments
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0-quickstart/README.md | 14 +++++++-------
2-networking/README.md | 4 ++--
9-privacy-and-stuff/README.md | 0
book.json | 3 ---
4 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
create mode 100644 9-privacy-and-stuff/README.md
diff --git a/0-quickstart/README.md b/0-quickstart/README.md
index 05f8ca0..cf31f9a 100644
--- a/0-quickstart/README.md
+++ b/0-quickstart/README.md
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ To create and gain acces to virtual machine you need to:
1. One of the access options is the web interface that is available at [https://cloud.muni.cz](https://cloud.muni.cz). We recommend using the English version of the interface. The Czech translation of individual terms is not yet sufficiently experienced and their use may complicate communication with technical support. Use the following credentials to log in:
-2. **Domain** **-** UCN
+2. **Domain -** UCN
-3. **User Name - **UÄŚO[^1]@ucn.muni.cz
-4. **Password - **your secondary password.
+3. **User Name -** UÄŚO[^1]@ucn.muni.cz
+4. **Password -** your secondary password.
> Please note that you need to access OpenStack from within the internal university network. You can either use the two available networks - [eduroam and MUNI](https://it.muni.cz/en/services/wireless-wi-fi-connection "How to connect to Masaryk University network") or setup a [VPN access](https://it.muni.cz/en/services/vpn "How to setup a VPN access.").
>
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ To create and gain acces to virtual machine you need to:
To create a first instance accessible from the network you typically need to go through a few one-time steps that are not required later on. The first step is to create/import SSH keys.
-1. To create a new SSH key, go to **Project > Compute > Key Pairs **and click the button "Create Key Pair"
+1. To create a new SSH key, go to **Project > Compute > Key Pairs** and click the button "Create Key Pair"
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@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ To create a first instance accessible from the network you typically need to go
All network traffic is blocked in OpenStack by default. You need to explicitly grant access to individual services by utilising Security Groups. This is similar to setting up firewall rules on your router or server. If setup correctly, you can access your virtual machine via SSH connection from your terminal.[^2]
-1. Go to **Project > Networks > Security Groups **You can see a default security group. You can either create a new one or edit the default by hitting "Manage Rules"
+1. Go to **Project > Networks > Security Groups** You can see a default security group. You can either create a new one or edit the default by hitting "Manage Rules"
2. Next you need to add two new rules to be able to connect to your new instance. Hit the button "Add rule", give it a name and choose "ALL ICMP". Leave the rest of the fields unchanged.
@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@ All network traffic is blocked in OpenStack by default. You need to explicitly g
## 4. Start a virtual machine
-1. To spin up a new virtual machine, navigate to **Project > Compute > Instances** and hit the button "**Launch Instance**"
+1. To spin up a new virtual machine, navigate to **Project > Compute > Instances** and hit the button "Launch Instance"
2. Choose a name for your virtual machine.
-3. From the drop-down menu, choose **"Image" ** as a source and select an operating system that you desire to run on your instance.
+3. From the drop-down menu, choose **"Image"** as a source and select an operating system that you desire to run on your instance.
4. Choose a suitable configuration of RAM/CPUS/Disk space, also known as a Flavor.
5. Add a virtual network for your instance.
6. You can leave the rest of the fields unchanged.
diff --git a/2-networking/README.md b/2-networking/README.md
index a5acb21..33a498f 100644
--- a/2-networking/README.md
+++ b/2-networking/README.md
@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
Instances in OpenStack make use of user-defined internal networks, through which they can communicate. To access your instances from an external network, you need to connect the internal and the external network via a virtual router and allocate a public \(floating\) IP address to your virtual machine.
-By logging in, you are automatically provided with a default internal network **"internal-net"** and a default virtual router that connects to the public network **"public-float-21" **with a subnet of **192.168.0.0/24. **In order to make your instance publicly accessible, you only need to assign a public IP to it.
+By logging in, you are automatically provided with a default internal network **"internal-net"** and a default virtual router that connects to the public network **"public-float-21"** with a subnet of **192.168.0.0/24.** In order to make your instance publicly accessible, you only need to assign a public IP to it.
## 1. Internal network creation {#Internal network creation}
-1. In the left menu navigate to **Project > Network > Networks** and hit **"Create network".**
+1. In the left menu navigate to **Project > Network > Networks** and hit "Create network".
2. Give your network a name and set a subnet.
3. In details add also DNS server addresses. They need to be set explicitly to **147.251.4.33** and **147.251.6.10**.
diff --git a/9-privacy-and-stuff/README.md b/9-privacy-and-stuff/README.md
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e69de29
diff --git a/book.json b/book.json
index c9aa076..428dda9 100644
--- a/book.json
+++ b/book.json
@@ -22,8 +22,5 @@
"url": "URL_TO_BOOK.PDF",
"label": "Download to PDF"
},
- "custom-favicon": {
- "favicon": "_book/gitbook/images/openstack-logo.ico"
- }
}
}
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