From 0be175201228c04b84f0e468307de9be5a5ed0e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ketil Albertsen <ketil.albertsen@uninett.no>
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 15:00:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Language check and correction of a number of errors.
git-svn-id: https://simplesamlphp.googlecode.com/svn/trunk@445 44740490-163a-0410-bde0-09ae8108e29a
---
docs/source/simplesamlphp-changelog.xml | 20 ++++++++++----------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/source/simplesamlphp-changelog.xml b/docs/source/simplesamlphp-changelog.xml
index 431608b0c..614a9e365 100644
--- a/docs/source/simplesamlphp-changelog.xml
+++ b/docs/source/simplesamlphp-changelog.xml
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
</section>
<section>
- <title>Changelog</title>
+ <title>Change log</title>
- <para>Here is changes between simpleSAML versions. Look here if you are
+ <para>Here is changes between simpleSAMLphp versions. Look here if you are
upgrading, to see if there are any changes to the config format.</para>
<section>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
<para>Released 2007-10-15. Revision 28.</para>
<warning>
- <para>Both <filename>config.php</filename> and metadata format is
+ <para>Both <filename>config.php</filename> and metadata format are
changed. Look at the templates to understand the new format.</para>
</warning>
@@ -38,14 +38,14 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Metadata files have been more tidy. Removed unused entries.
- Look at the new templates on how to change your existing
- metadata.</para>
+ <para>Metadata files made tidier. Unused entries removed. Look at
+ the new templates on how to change your existing metadata.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Support for sending metadata on mail to Feide. Automatically
- detecting if you have configured Feide as the default IdP.</para>
+ <para>Support for sending metadata by mail to Feide. Automatically
+ detecting whether you have configured Feide as the default IdP or
+ not.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Initial proof of concept implementation of "User consent on
+ <para>Initial 'proof of concept' implementation of "User consent on
attribute release"</para>
</listitem>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Initial implementation of SAML 2.0 Single Log-Out
+ <para>Initial implementation of SAML 2.0 Single Log Out
functionality both for SP and IdP. Seems to work, but not yet
well-tested.</para>
</listitem>
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