From 1e26d23a24fd81beed35ada5ff271c2b092ceef7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ketil Albertsen <ketil.albertsen@uninett.no>
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:58:50 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Language check and correction of a number of errors.
git-svn-id: https://simplesamlphp.googlecode.com/svn/trunk@444 44740490-163a-0410-bde0-09ae8108e29a
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docs/source/simplesamlphp-bridge.xml | 31 ++++++++++++++--------------
1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/source/simplesamlphp-bridge.xml b/docs/source/simplesamlphp-bridge.xml
index b9b758f9b..a0f4621ea 100644
--- a/docs/source/simplesamlphp-bridge.xml
+++ b/docs/source/simplesamlphp-bridge.xml
@@ -22,22 +22,22 @@
<title>Setting up WebSSO bridges</title>
<para>simpleSAMLphp can be used to bridge between two WebSSO protocols.
- Here is some short descriptions of how to setup the different bridge
- configurations.</para>
+ Below you will find short descriptions of how to setup the different
+ bridge configurations.</para>
<section>
<title>Bridging SAML 2.0 <-> SAML 2.0</title>
- <para>In this setup you can bridge between two federations using SAML
- 2.0.</para>
+ <para>This setup will bridge between two federations using SAML
+ 2.0:</para>
- <para>To approach this, you must configure both saml 2.0 IdP and SP
- hosted metadata, and in the IdP hosted metadata configure the auth
- parameter to be the SP initialization endpoint, like this:</para>
+ <para>Configure both SAML 2.0 IdP and SP hosted metadata. In the IdP
+ hosted metadata, configure the auth parameter to be the SP
+ initialization endpoint, like this:</para>
- <screen> 'auth' => 'saml2/sp/initSSO.php?idpentityid=sam.feide.no'</screen>
+ <screen> 'auth' => 'saml2/sp/initSSO.php?idpentityid=sam.feide.no'</screen>
- <para>As you can see you specify the IdP in the remote federation as a
+ <para>As shown, the IdP in the remote federation is specified as a
parameter to the initalization endpoint.</para>
<note>
@@ -84,16 +84,17 @@
<section>
<title>Support</title>
- <para>If you have problems to get this work, or want to discuss
- simpleSAMLphp with other users of the software you are lucky! Around
- simpleSAMLphp there is a great Open source community, and you are welcome
- to join! Both for asking question, answer other questions, request
- improvements or contribute with code or plugins of your own.</para>
+ <para>If you need help to make this work, or want to discuss simpleSAMLphp
+ with other users of the software, you are fortunate: Around simpleSAMLphp
+ there is a great Open source community, and you are welcome to join! The
+ forums are open for you to ask questions, contribute answers other further
+ questions, request improvements or contribute with code or plugins of your
+ own.</para>
<para>Visit the project page of simpleSAMLphp at: <ulink
url="http://code.google.com/p/simplesamlphp/">http://code.google.com/p/simplesamlphp/</ulink></para>
- <para>And please join the mailinglist: <ulink
+ <para>Please join the mailinglist: <ulink
url="???">https://postlister.uninett.no/sympa/subscribe/simplesaml</ulink></para>
</section>
</article>
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